TehBamski@lemmy.world to Comic Strips@lemmy.worldEnglish · 3 months ago[Sea Mask] by thelittleworldoflizi.imgur.comimagemessage-square6fedilinkarrow-up1520arrow-down10
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minus-squareMagnyusG@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up6arrow-down2·3 months agoit would’ve been a little funnier if the had dolphin said, “It’s a mask” after being proven wrong
minus-squarePunnyName@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up14arrow-down1·3 months agoShow, don’t tell. The comic works as is.
minus-squareMagnyusG@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up4·3 months agoBoth work, I just feel that admittance would have been more amusing than just being stupefied.
minus-squareMajorMajormajormajor@lemmy.calinkfedilinkarrow-up4·3 months agoI feel it would have been better for the dolphin to say “those are shorts.” after the shark put them on. Better punchline that way.
minus-squarePunnyName@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up2·3 months agoTHAT would have been fucking funny!
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it would’ve been a little funnier if the had dolphin said, “It’s a mask” after being proven wrong
Show, don’t tell. The comic works as is.
Both work, I just feel that admittance would have been more amusing than just being stupefied.
I feel it would have been better for the dolphin to say “those are shorts.” after the shark put them on. Better punchline that way.
THAT would have been fucking funny!