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Cake day: June 9th, 2023

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  • Too many droplets, especially on near verticals. There there should be very few, running down. Sides of nose, front of cheek, should be mostly clean. Just gleaming from being drenched in a film of water if that’s the case, but nothing also works. A single running droplet with path lightly traced on the side of the nose will do the trick of conveing wetness instead of the multiple droplets there.

    The upper lip and chin look good, that’s where I expected to see droplets accumulated. Above the brow and under the eye also.

    For extra challenge: a big droplet forming on the tip of the nose. Let’s see if you can make it not look gross 😄










  • Re: rain

    1. It should fall very rectilinear, there’s a certain curvature on it instead.
    2. on the body, it should drop always towards the ground and puddle when not in a near vertical surface. If you want to show the path it took, the arms could start in the orientation you drew (longitudinal) but veer off to the side (towards the ground) to highlight the arm movement from the side of the body to the face.
    3. It clings more to skin than painted surfaces, so thinner runs, smaller but higher puddles / droplets on artificial surfaces. Conversely, meandering, wider runs, and wider but shallower droplets and puddles on skin.
    4. water droplets have less color and are basically just texture and reflections. They should have the same pallette as the surface they’re on.

    I really like this piece. A lot of raw emotion, fantastic color pallette.